The breaks are really good, and the guitar is fantastic. But some parts are so loud and crowded that it can be confusing.
Thanks. I wanted to create a dense flurry of activity to mimic the wing movements of the hummingbirds. Its less about individual lines and more about general shape and gesture like pointilism. I rushed to meet the deadline, but it would be nice to go over this again when the competition dust settles =)
Felt a bit empty, had the drums been more buried it would work very well as a background track for a cave level in a game. The sub at 04:23 was an octave too high for me.
This is what I call groove. Top notch!
That snare though, full stereo separated and sounds like it's clipping. Sub is also quiet compared to the powerful lead, but overall quite the ride. The outro was beautiful.
02:37 confused me. That was a fun transition 3:16 was awesome though. Some awkward stops kinda ruined it for me though.
Thanks for the input, dalux, and which stops specifically bothered you? I can try to fix them up after the judging ends.
Amazing sound quality on the instruments, just wish the mix was a bit more accounted for.
Now this is creativity.
Default FL Stock FL snare at 02:00 kinda ruined the track for me, but overall it was enjoyable.
Theyre actually the kick and snare stock of fl, i dont know im starting to like them a lot haha
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